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#1
Just do it, here in this thread, and post it. Try not to spend too long or to think. Here's mine:

Inspiration has struck!
Like a shovel to face
like a rainbow in the sky
same thing

You can tell that I'm bored
like a llama in transit
like a writer who's silly
unlike Hermione

A shovel has actually
struck me in the face
it hurts like hell
make it stop

Nah just kidding
but it makes you think
now, can a rainbow hurt?
I think not
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You're just another brick in the wall
Last edited by En_zed at Aug 25, 2008,
#2
Je n'ai pas de animaux

Oh noes I don't have an animal!!
Every day I cry!!
I just want an animal!!
#4
**** **** ass jeep balls
testicles fork zebra **** ****
my haiku fails super
Vikings? What Vikings? We are but poor, simple farmers. The village was burning when we got here, and the people must have slain themselves.
#5
Quote by COBHC6
**** **** ass jeep balls
testicles fork zebra **** ****
my haiku fails super


thats not even a haiku
#8
im sitting at home
and i cant write a poem
i cant make it rhyme
and i dont have the time
and the cat just ate my fuking fish

...true story r.i.p fish
PRS Custom 24
Rivera KnuckleHead 55
Budda SuperDrive 30
Vox AC15C1
#9
Quote by seljer
thats not even a haiku

how so
Vikings? What Vikings? We are but poor, simple farmers. The village was burning when we got here, and the people must have slain themselves.
#11
Quote by NGD1313
A poem.

There, you pushy bastard.


Push, push!
Push this democratic fool!
Shun, push!
Shuuuuuun!
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You're just another brick in the wall
#13
my amp is burning
the tables are turning

the bassist trips
the singer slips

the gig is decieving
the crowd is leaving

the drummer is mad
the singer is sad

he sings a song
while smoking a bong

he slips again
just like back then
#17
Quote by En_zed
Push, push!
Push this democratic fool!
Shun, push!
Shuuuuuun!


Gabbly gook,
I write poems like Dr. Seuss.
No rhyme to lame
For me to use,
Cause I can take comfort in knowing
That I'm still a better poet than you.
Shuuuuuunnnnn.
#19
Quote by NGD1313
Gabbly gook,
I write poems like Dr. Seuss.
No rhyme to lame
For me to use,
Cause I can take comfort in knowing
That I'm still a better poet than you.
Shuuuuuunnnnn.


I write poems like Mr T.
I can rhyme like the original MC
It's "too", you foo'!
not "to" or "two"!
So shut up
and bow, to my mighty written bling-bling.
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You're just another brick in the wall
#21
Quote by En_zed
I write poems like Mr T.
I can rhyme like the original MC
It's "too", you foo'!
not "to" or "two"!
So shut up
and bow, to my mighty written bling-bling.

OMFG!!11! Poem battle!!
#22
trapped in the pit
there is no escape

masturbation threads
rolling heads

fap fap fap
crap crap crap

rock'n roll
rick'n roll

posting a fruit
will get you a lawsuit


meh..
#23
Quote by sum_ugly_man
Roses are friend
violets are friend
friend friend friend friend
I need a friend.


Aww hug?
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You're just another brick in the wall
#24
Quote by slayaplaya
trapped in the pit
there is no escape

masturbation threads
rolling heads

fap fap fap
crap crap crap

rock'n roll
rick'n roll

posting a fruit
will get you a lawsuit


meh..

#25
Quote by En_zed
I write poems like Mr T.
I can rhyme like the original MC
It's "too", you foo'!
not "to" or "two"!
So shut up
and bow, to my mighty written bling-bling.


This is supposed to be a poetry thread.
For those widely-versed and well read.
So I'll laugh at your rap and tell you it's spelled
Fool, not foo', my unworthy opponent, En Zed.
#27
I dreamt I was a panda
Gliding through a meadow
and when I awoke that morning
I was wearing a panda costume

or

Took into this Chicken wing
Don't be scared
It's tasty and rich in meat
and therefore shouldn't be shared.
Flap it and enjoy yourself...

Xbox Live GT = The Donkey Fly
'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
#28
Are my stigmas telling the truth
while they're bleeding their ****
out
suffer like he did as we all did what we did
die for what you believe not
#30
Why do you make them feel this way
They’re worthless now degraded
How can you be surprised
That are what you made them
And what you made them is worthless

Some kids are dying while you drop bombs

Are you surprised ?
They think violence solves it all
Now we’ve all got a problem and this is you all
So now they can’t go on
Mad at the world
They kill a few before turning on themselves

But they’ll be known
“Now I’ll be famous.”
And this..
This is true
They’ll be famous
Now not so alone

Some Kids are dying while you drop bombs

Right..well I didn't just write that now, but i would appreciate some feedback on it I was going to put it in it's own thread but didn't want to be flamed lol. I had to write it for English. By feedback I mean, I know it's terrible but what can I do to make it better lol
Btw it's about the shooting that happened in that American Mall In '06
#31
Quote by IDuckLlamas
Why do you make them feel this way
They’re worthless now degraded
How can you be surprised
That are what you made them
And what you made them is worthless

Some kids are dying while you drop bombs

Are you surprised ?
They think violence solves it all
Now we’ve all got a problem and this is you all
So now they can’t go on
Mad at the world
They kill a few before turning on themselves

But they’ll be known
“Now I’ll be famous.”
And this..
This is true
They’ll be famous
Now not so alone

Some Kids are dying while you drop bombs

Right..well I didn't just write that now, but i would appreciate some feedback on it I was going to put it in it's own thread but didn't want to be flamed lol. I had to write it for English. By feedback I mean, I know it's terrible but what can I do to make it better lol
Btw it's about the shooting that happened in that American Mall In '06


If you really want constructive criticism, post in S&L.
#32
Quote by En_zed
Aww hug?



really? That's gonna be my first hug since that one time in the park, it was dark and there was a guy with a hook hand...he told me he was a pirate He was far from one.
#33
Quote by NGD1313
This is supposed to be a poetry thread.
For those widely-versed and well read.
So I'll laugh at your rap and tell you it's spelled
Fool, not foo', my unworthy opponent, En Zed.


This is a poetry thread,
but not in the pit.
In the pit, it becomes fecal matter
of the pit monkeys.
Widely-versed? Bwaha.
You make me laugh, my monkey-buddy
Silly monkeys,
give them thumbs,
they make a thread,
and have a poetry battle.

That's right, I just quoted Tool
like I did with Mr T.
Because he says "foo" not "fool"
and you're a sucka.
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You're just another brick in the wall
#34
Quote by NGD1313
If you really want constructive criticism, post in S&L.


S&L? Sorry I'm a n00b direct me.
#36
Quote by IDuckLlamas
S&L? Sorry I'm a n00b direct me.



SONGWRITING AND LYRICS
Flap it and enjoy yourself...

Xbox Live GT = The Donkey Fly
'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
#37
A haiku is a piece of poetry
Where the third line is irrelevant
Refrigerator

“Who are you then?.."
"- I am part of that power which eternally wills evil and eternally works good.”
KULTURKAMPF
lastFM
#38
Quote by IDuckLlamas
S&L? Sorry I'm a n00b direct me.


Aww I think an 08'er needs a hug.
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You're just another brick in the wall
#40
oh dear, oh ****,
I strayed into the pit,
and now i can't,
get the **** out of here.

It rhymes and it's about the pit
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