Hi, I've never posted here before.

Anyway, I have four tracks up on my artist profile, but tracks three and four are the ones I would like critted.

So, tell me what you think. Leave me links to crit, and I will crit them tomorrow (it is late here)


Thanks in advance

EDIT: Btw, the titles are pretentious to piss off a friend. I'm not just being a dick.