#1
A kinda dark toned feel on this song very slow and soothing harmonies i hope you enjoy feel free to check out my self-titled album

any crits would be appreciated thank you

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#2
that was not bad, don't really listen to music like that to much so it's hard to find comparisions, i personally was not a big fan of the tone, seemed a little much like an amplified fly.... i really like fuller sounds:P that is just me. hehe. drums really would help the song a lot, some vocals would be cool too

well check mine out if u have the time
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=940694