It sounds like you were forcing your voice to be too high. Very unnatural sounding, and unless you're Thom Yorke it's never going to sound right. Try singing it an octave lower and see how that sounds. Make it your own, just keep it in the same key.


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You don't want me to critique this, I'm too much of a radiohead fan.
haha well i do want you to critique it just gimme your opinion i won't be offended