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This is the second piece I've written, and I would appreciate your opinions.
Crit4crit.

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You seem to scribble away
The sunshine leaks in
"Its morning already? But im not done yet!"
Finish your writing; ill wait 5 more minutes

Wait till your done makin' history
Ill fill in the end w/ some music

We'll change the world
With our songs about nothing
Words that fill us w/ thoughts
Of what you were writing
Down in your crumbled up notes

No, don't stop in the middle
Finish it up now
It doesn't matter what they think or I think
Or even what you think; just write about

The things that go on in your mind
Ill fill in the end w/ some music

We'll change the world
With our songs about nothing
Words that fill us w/ thoughts
Of what you were writing
Down in your crumbled up notes

Not much to say but to
Start writing again
Babe, when you pour your heart and soul into
what you do best, well, lets say the rest is just

History
Filled to the brim w/ some music

We'll change the world
With our songs about nothing
Words that fill us w/ thoughts
Of what you were writing
Down in your crumbled up notes