#1
The tape wheels spin
and the low hum comes alive
I listen through static cracks and pops
a single stuttered message
a goodbye
I don't know if I listen to remember
or to forget.


Love the Low end
#2
simple but very nice (sorry, terrible word).
i think you could get rid of the "a" before "goodbye" though. not sure i can say much more. but i liked it for what it was.