#1
I have all these things i wanna do with you
do you want it too?

i've got all these things i wanna say to you
do you feel like i do?

i think we're ready to.....
open up the door to.....

sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees
sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees

i wanna tell you how i feel
will you knight me if i kneel?

i wanna get it out of my heart
cause its been there since the start

i think we're ready to.....
open up the door to.....

sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees
sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees
#2
I have all these things i wanna do with you
do you want it too? A bit predictable, but, its okay

i've got all these things i wanna say to you
do you feel like i do? Yes it goes nicely with the first 2 lines, but, tbh, its been done before.

i think we're ready to.....
open up the door to..... Presuming this is a prechorus/bridge, i kind of like it

sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees
sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees I like its simplicity and clarity. good chorus.

i wanna tell you how i feel
will you knight me if i kneel? THIS is a much nicer versey thing than the first one. More interseting rhymes, better imagery, blah blah blah. its just a lot better.

i wanna get it out of my heart
cause its been there since the start

i think we're ready to.....
open up the door to.....

sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees
sex and drugs and money scandals,
politics and killing sprees

Overall it is kind of weak lyrically. i know what your trying to express, and probably so would a listener, but theres nothing that... catches my ear. try to make the verses a little more different, more interesting, more unusual.
but its still perfectly useable as a set of words.
Good job, but needs some work.

Crit for crit?
its called
(Untitled) Depressed little pit of dispair that came up with.
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