Okay please just let me know what you think.
the emotions are hopefully self evident. Its a kind of acoustic, single finger picked guitar, sort of like Vermillion Pt2, by slipknot, or a little like Atwa or Aerials by SOAD.
Any opinions are accepted gratefully,

Hate echoes within,
Blades tear out my sin,
Tongue dies in my throat,
Alone i start to choke,

Obliviously blind,
Knives pass by my time,
You dont seem to care,
Go buy new shoes, dye your hair,

While i die,
While i cry,
While i bleed in my room,
My restless tomb,


'If I were not a physicist, I would probably be a musician. I often think in music. I live my daydreams in music. I see my life in terms of music.' Albert Einstein