it's alright. you should work more on making up melodies in your solo.

transcribe paul desmond's solo to get some ideas of things he did.

"Those who dream by night, in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that all was vanity; but dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, and make it possible."
It wasn't really meant to be an improvisation, not intentionall atleast, as you can see I just kind of got a little distracted. And the rest is history. :P

I can see where your coming from though, Think it took me a little while to figure out where I was going on the spot like that.