#2
it's alright. you should work more on making up melodies in your solo.

transcribe paul desmond's solo to get some ideas of things he did.
http://richmusic.dmusic.com

"Those who dream by night, in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that all was vanity; but dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, and make it possible."
#3
It wasn't really meant to be an improvisation, not intentionall atleast, as you can see I just kind of got a little distracted. And the rest is history. :P

I can see where your coming from though, Think it took me a little while to figure out where I was going on the spot like that.