Friendly Stoat
Call me Sam.
Join date: Jan 2007
1,094 IQ
#1
So here are 2 new songs that I started recently, possibly for a solo project or possibly for a new band. As the title says I haven't got round to finishing them yet but I just wanted some opinions on what I've done so far please

I'll do C4C if anyone wants.

Thanks!
Attachments:
Screamo.zip
Gear:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser
Ibanez GRG170DX
Peavey Vypyr 75
Fender Princeton 650 DSP w/ Celestion 80w speaker
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
8,191 IQ
#2
Hey thanks for the crit mate =). I liked both of these to let me start off...

Screamo 1 sounded good in the beginning but it felt a little repetitive which isn't a problem since vocals could go over it. The next set of riffs were nice and the Chorus part was good too. Keep going with that one.

Screamo 2 I liked it better. It had a nicer flow i felt. The Rhythm guitar is flying in the beginning, i liked it though. Then the clean part was a nice touch. It went back tot the beginning that's cool. I like the riffs that had the constant rests in them it, it was cool almost Paramoreish (new word.) But i liked it.

Overall: keep going with both of them. I like screamo and both songs should turn out nice.
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7421
Ibanez SA160
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Randall RM100
Madison Divinity II
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
H&K 4x12
Friendly Stoat
Call me Sam.
Join date: Jan 2007
1,094 IQ
#3
Thanks mate I'll probably post both songs again when they're finished
Gear:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser
Ibanez GRG170DX
Peavey Vypyr 75
Fender Princeton 650 DSP w/ Celestion 80w speaker