I made this song. Umm... its my first song that I have made and I wrote lyrics that dont make sense so that the vocal pattern can be heard... they are also really quiet lyrics. Ummm, ya im cool for criticism... go to my music and rate it also if you want to... ive only been playing for 10 months

heres the link

and it might totally suck.... and the guitar part isnt without flaws...
Last edited by otacon17 at Aug 28, 2008,