You need vocals. Also tighten up the playing. You get off beat a lot in a bad way. Just practice the lines till you can do em crossfaded then record. There pretty awesome though. I don't even like bluesy stuff either.
Quote by kranoscorp
I find that I feel the same about women who play bass as I think of immigrants in America.

I respect them for finding a place in society under a lot of ridicule, but I have an odd paranoia that they are going to steal my job.