#1
A cover of that beautiful solo I did sometime ago.
I've been playing guitar for 10 months, so forget mistakes please
In the video my tone is a bit worse, but in reality it sounds much more "liquid" and a-la Petrucci xD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQBLuKjB8GY

Constructive criticism is welcome!Comment and vote, please ^_^
#2
It seemed like your guitar was kinda out of tune, some bends were flat and is really important to do vibrato on the long sustained notes (bended notes included). I would suggest you to use your wrist's motion to make the bendings.

Despite of those little details, for only 10 months, it was very good and with a little more practice, you'll nailed in no time.

Check out this lesson of the master Satriani: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yCbS1BWrTcs. There are some useful tips to improve greatly your playing.
Besides being a guitar player, I'm a big fan of the guitar. I love that damn instrument. Steve Vai

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