#1
Very weird piece. Thoughts? C4C

Talk. Patterns. Stop. Talk.

I feel their eyes
They watch me
I'm being assessed
Like it's some kind of test
Only stop when I stare back
Turn away, turn to stone
But they turn back in the corners of eyes

Talk. Stop. Talk.

Got to catch the red eye before it leaves
I didn't even want to
But here it is
Here we are
Bound together
I can't leave but I hate to stay
This is too strong, too much taste

Stop. Talking.

Breathing deep
Breathing shallow
Breathing hard
Breathing loud
Breathing wrong
Breathing. Stop.
Leave me.
Leave tomorrow.
Come back.
Stop.

All of you
All of you here
Stop trying to escape
Stop. Talking.
I play by my own rules. And I have one rule; There are no rules... but if there are, they're there to be broken. Even this one.


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#2
not bad, i get a kinda metallica vide from the repetition of "Breathing" like One's bridge, maybe thats not what your goin for but thats what i heard in my head... its pretty good!

Origionaly Posted by CTFOD
Origionaly Posted by hownowbrowncow:
Get a new bicycle
Then you can ride it with no handlebars.

No handlebars.

No handlebars...