#1
I wrote some lyrics to go along with a song me and my band wrote. I wanted to know what you guys think, and if you'd make any changes, and what. I'm a vag so i'm too scared to sing it for our guitar player. the song doesn't have a name yet, if u think of a good one, let me know

LYRICS:

[Verse 1]
There they go again,
their life is a living sin,
can you go another day,
of them taking your life away?
colder than a stone
they wont leave you alone
you can't stop to take a break
half dead your half awake

[Chorus]
Help me, save me, take me
from this awful place
show me, guide me, free me
from this awful place

[Verse 2]
Was this all a big mistake,
how much longer can you take
pour out all your fears
and let them disappear
their eyes are everywhere
can't blink, all they do is stare
there's nowhere left to stay
all you can do is runaway

[Chorus]
Help me, save me, take me
from this awful place
show me, guide me, free me
from this awful place
#3
Quote by twistedpunk442
"Walking The Path of No Return?"


thanks, we actually decided to call it 'The Path of No Return'