#1
Hey,
ive been playing for only about 5months MAX.. and still relatively noob.. by relatively i mean im still very **** at guitar
this is the first song i learn to play all the way through.. there are loooooads of mistakes in it and its not great but yeah.. slow and steady wins the race.
im using a schecter omen extreme floyd rose with a roland cube 30x amp.
Any constructive criticism very welcome, ideas on how to improve and whatnot also.
Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q4g01CK2QZc
#2
bump. someone comment? i need some feedback because i teach myself and getting feedback from good guitar players will help thanks
#3
For a first attempt its very good but as someone commented you on you need a better sound its very clean were in the song its fuzzy. Also make sure your guitar is tune man some of it sounded out of tune.

Just keep practising man!
#4
yeah only been playing since feb/march so yeah can't expect too much... what do you think i should practice on? do i use my fingers properly? i feel i maybe use my pinky too much for thinkgs i can use my ring finger for..
#5
Sounds good!

One suggestion i have, would just be to use bends on that main riff, rather than the slide, i'm sure you know what piece, if not I can elaborate. That will help make it sound a bit closer to the real thing, but thats pretty minor.

Anyway sounds good for the short time you've been playing, and just keep on practicing!