#2
there shouldnt be 5 chords in your progression

that just makes it sound weird
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#3
Quote by Hale_91
there shouldnt be 5 chords in your progression

that just makes it sound weird
im sorry i didnt do the standard 4 chord progression, i tried doing something different?
#4
yeah, experimenting is great, thats all good.

i just think it sounds weird.

maybe the 5th bar shouldnt be another chord, but a run or some random thing.
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#6
I still love your bridge. It's quite intense. this song is awesome. nice easy listening and some nice (noteasy?) listening there in the middle. I don't really have anything bad to say about it. chorus was really awesome as well as the verses. you made a somewhat simple chord progression sound pretty sweet.

I love your songs.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...