#1
Ok. So first off I don't usually rhyme this much in my poetry, but I liked the way this one came out =)
Second, well this is the second thing I ever posted (how ironic) but I'm hoping to become more active in these forums instead of just being a voyeur like I have been the past few months. Sooo be prepared to see more of me in the future!

Oh yeah crit for crit and all that.

What the hell would satan want with my soul anyways?

"We have all eternity to be the same", I said
With anchored eyes shown blood - shot - red
Offered pennies for my thoughts, but made them priceless instead

However, not entirely free

The common answer seems to be
"Follow your heart, one day you will see"
Still, all mine has to say is
"Hell, it beats me"
Last edited by adamacoustic at Aug 31, 2008,
#2
i always seem to write in free verse

but i like the poem but the name not so much
Quote by HaKattack
Woman tone, eh?

Set treble to PUT THE TOILET SEAT DOWN WHEN YOU'RE DONE
Mids to YOU'RE DRIVING TOO FAST
Bass to WHAT DO YOU MEAN, "MAKE ME A SANDWICH"?
Gain to NOT TONIGHT, I HAVE A HEADACHE.

starter of the nadsat group
#4
My one thought: get rid of the packaging.
Sorry if you expected more. That'll help more than anything.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!