iv been trying to write a grunge song lately and everything so far has been a flop i want the song to be about suicide but i want the meaning to be discreet within the lyrics this is what i hav so far:

Suns rise
Beautiful and warm
But the sun is hottest
Just before the storm
Seasons fade
Dull and gray
Trying to drain away
Drops of yesterday

help would be greatly appreciated thx
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Or, how about Start to slowly fade away?? If you want the meaning to be discret within the lyrics, than you should put that. Because it could be the person, the emotion, or the seasons.