#1
here I'm the songwriter in my band you see. What do you think? All written by me
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#4
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i always thought the emo fashion was dead

Emo?
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#5
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i always thought the emo fashion was dead

and its music...BLAHHHH




no youre just some closed minded douche bagg.
#6
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no youre just some closed minded douche bagg.

Thank you good sir
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#7
crap to my ears
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#8
i'm not too big a fan of screaming, it kills a song in my opinion. but i do like the part around 18 seconds in and 1:45.

good job dude...
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#9
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i'm not too big a fan of screaming, it kills a song in my opinion. but i do like the part around 18 seconds in and 1:45.

good job dude...

Thanks man It means a lot (Y). Anything of yours you want me to check out?

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crap to my ears

Way to be mature I can be mature too, so suck my dick if you don't have anything constructive to say fag. I'm all for criticism but people like you piss me off. Good day sir
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#12
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i must of hurt your feelings...sorry GOOD SIR

"4. Constructive criticism only.

"You suck, your band sucks, lol gtfo newb" is NOT constructive. If you have nothing helpful to say, leave the thread. Insulting/arguing WILL result in a warning/banning."

Not my fault you don't know how to follow rules. Gtfo my thread jackass
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#13
Way to be mature I can be mature too, so suck my dick if you don't have anything constructive to say fag. I'm all for criticism but people like you piss me off. Good day sir


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#14
never said you suck or you band, id be amazed if you could prove i said that , i said emo sucks. ****ing people take **** the wrong way
#16
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and do me the honour, report me, if you cant handle it

I can handle it, which is why I haven't reported you or anything, just don't expect me to sit here and shut the f*ck up either, I will say something back to you, and you should handle it too. You can't blame me for taking emo as an insult when neither me or my band are emo, okay, we have emo influences, but we're not an emo band.
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#17
your a douche bag for trolling and bringing up **** that doesnt have anything to do with the thread.

your a douche bag for assuming anything/anyone is emo. i didnt see anything any where that said "emo".
#18
Other than the screaming guy you have a pretty decent pop-punk song.
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#19
Well, I'm impressed and I'm not.

The screams were done poorly and the singing lacked a little "oomph" if you know what I mean.

However, you guys combined some cool elements into the song - a breakdown in a pop-punk song with some screaming in the formula. That was pretty cool. I think that if you guys had a better recording with better guitar sound and vocals, it could be a rather good song.
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#20
Er, couldn't listen to the first song, not my cup of tea, the acoustic cover of last train home however had some potential. A bit of a better recorded mix and some more subtle multi-tracking of the vocals. maybe multi-tracking the guitar playing, which had no faults by the way, just to make it sound a bit fuller, record two guitar tracks, pan one left and one right, a bit of a thick, smooth bassline in the background would have been nice too, I'm not saying electric it up, I'm just saying a bit of fancy studio farting about would do the song some justice.
#21
I for one love it! I usually don't like that kind of screaming, but the clean vocals counter them nicely.
But the bit when you're trying to sound heavy just made me feel like "I can do that better"

I really like the song, put's me in a good mood, for like, throwing stuff at the police.
It's a bit gritty, but that's charming and fits the song!
Great stuff! Keep it up!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=938991
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#22
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I for one love it! I usually don't like that kind of screaming, but the clean vocals counter them nicely.
But the bit when you're trying to sound heavy just made me feel like "I can do that better"

I really like the song, put's me in a good mood, for like, throwing stuff at the police.
It's a bit gritty, but that's charming and fits the song!
Great stuff! Keep it up!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=938991

That's incredibly professional sounding & I like the guitar parts, retro-sounding, but not recycled, it's fresh, and I love it The drums could be a tad more interesting, but it's a very solid song and I love how everything flows Awesome (Y). & thanks for your comments on our track
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