#1
Basically inspired by me having a flashback to being trapped in a fun house (the one with all the weird mirrors). Yes, I know there is a buzzing string at the beginning... it has a point. Yes, I know there is a tempo change. It also has a point.

Just looking for some feedback, outside of those two things. Sorry for bad recording, Wal-Mart Microphone = bad.

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#2
one f*cking word, GREAT! I love the acoustic played. Can u PM me on how to make a riff like that one?????????
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#3
I really can imagine myself being trapped in a fun house! I think that's really important, that you get a feeling from the music, and you've succeded very well there.
For being recorded with cheap equipment its really good.
My only problem with it is that it sometimes lacks a bit of consistency, it just doesn't feel whole, like the bit at 00.40, i understand what your trying to bring with it, but I feel that it could be improved on.
Great work, keep it up!
Cheers! And thanks for the input!
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#4
I enjoy this a lot, i actually get a feel for the title with the song, maybe since its only guitar the transition doesnt set right, but it almost splits into two different songs at the middle. Still, keep up the good work!

also, check this out if you get a chance
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=950119
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My only problem with it is that it sometimes lacks a bit of consistency, it just doesn't feel whole, like the bit at 00.40, i understand what your trying to bring with it, but I feel that it could be improved on.

+1
at around 00:40's riff, you could have used some backup and many improvements can be made...
but overall, its cool...
cheers!!!