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Not to be the jealous friend
With the emotions hidden behind that line
But I swear to god we're falling apart
And your other life is nothing like I wanted it to be
But the doctors orders come through
And he's telling me that my state of mind
Is anything but perfect
So sweety, take my mind from me

And we will build ourselves a hospital
And live inside it's walls
And with my straight jacket and your medication
I do believe that we will work this out

And not to be this walking cliché
But I am, and that's the same
And I wont' forget these chances we made
Or the fact that I was so gutless as to pretend
That the doctors weren't gonna care
And that I wouldn't like your hair
But the way you look doesn't matter
It just helps when I'm awake

And we will build ourselves a hospital
And live inside it's walls
And with my straight jacket and your medication
I do believe that we will work this out
But the doctors here are our best friends
With their special treatment
The costs go through the roof, until we hide
Inside these padded walls
I do believe that we will work this out

Daniel, be a good man
I think I need someone to take my place
Daniel, I will owe you
If you keep this from getting out of hand

We will build ourselves a hospital
And live inside it's walls
With my straight jacket and your medication
I do believe that we will work this out

(Too many pills and not enough intervention
What a way to die)
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Quote by punkman_123
Damn Auals, you're messed up. :P


Quote by ZanasCross
This just reminded me of the time that my brother in law texted his mom on the night after his wedding. All it said was "Consummated."
#2
Quote by Auals

And we will build ourselves a hospital
And live inside it's walls
And with my straight jacket and your medication
I do believe that we will work this out


if this is just a poem then i think its ok but if this is a song i dunno how well those last two lines will work together. for that matter i dont know how your gonna pull off the "i do believe..." lines singing... unless of course your going for like alesana poetics and your going to be screaming through tears... that would be cool i do so love alesana.
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Hahaha, no, It works with the music, It's not just 4 chords that work, think Say Anything esque guitar changes to suit the lyrics
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Quote by punkman_123
Damn Auals, you're messed up. :P


Quote by ZanasCross
This just reminded me of the time that my brother in law texted his mom on the night after his wedding. All it said was "Consummated."