#1
the road is long
the same old song
on repeat in my head
and as i move on down
through each town
i know im better off dead
than close to you

the faster i run
away from the sun
the closer it seems to be,
when im done
and youve had your fun
taking whats left of me
ill be close to you

its not like i ever had a choice
its not like i ever had a voice
you did everything for me
a hollow shell
in my own personal hell
you took everything from me
#2
The content is good, I do not know the music behind it or how you are going to sing it, but just watch out rhyeming every word, sometimes it can come off as corny but then again there are some good songs that do that so, it is kind of just how you feel about the finished product,