Certainly not my cup of tea, but I thought it was cool anyway.

I thought some of the guitar overdubs were cool, that clean guitar coming in at 1:50 especially.

The recording quality of the vocals was pretty sketchy though dude. Vocals seemed distant throughout the entire song...and at 2:50 when the vocalist shouts it sounds like the track just cuts out.

I liked the overall structure of the song though, it was pretty good overall.

thanks for the crit!
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Pretty decent quality - i don't know what you recorded it on. The guitar playing was really cool for this genre. I don't really listen to this kind of music but the chorus licks sounded pretty cool. The vocals are actually pretty good it's just how it's all mixed down.

Everything needs to be mixed together. The vocals need to be compressed as they are all over the place in terms of volumes. The drums needs to come up too.
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