The beginning of a metal song i've been working on for about an hour haha. Please comment and tell me what you think. Any constructive criticism welcome.
Metal Song.zip
The Electric Guitar is good, but the Acoustic guitar at the start makes it sound too emo. I would get rid of it.
All I want is for everyone to go to hell...
...It's the last place I was seen before I lost myself

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Haha, yeah. I guess it sort of does, thanks. Ill see what other people say about it tho.
I, personally, like the guitar in the beginning. I don´t care wether it sounds Emo or not, it fits in the song. Nice drumming in the Intro, although the double bass kicks are usually played through the snare beats.
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.

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