#1
Hi,

This is something I wrote and recorded last night. I was messing on my Bass and came up with them licks at the start and then just added some extra sections. This is the first song I've recorded proper bass on. Because of this I am interested in your opinions on the mix. I had a quick mess around with volume levels of each instrument. Is the bass fine or should it be louder/quieter?

You can check it out here.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Donkey+Fly/

C4C.

Thanks.
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#2
pretty nice stuff , good sound quality , although in my opinion you could trie to get those shredding parts a bit cleaner , love the harmonized part after the shred ...
nice song , the ending is to early

crit mine?
its in my profile , differt kind of music