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crit 4 crit please help me out

heard things are goin great
dont think i can relate
maybe you could hold my hand
i wish that you would understand

im a house without a door
a carpet with no floor
the desert free of sage
a dog inside a cage
apart from you

hope that you are felling good
im just misunderstood
you should try and reason my rhymes
i think that you will probly find

im a house without a door
a carpet with no floor
the desert free of sage
a dog inside a cage
apart from you