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Ok, this was my first shot at writing, i play lead guitar for my band, so it's either my bro that writes (rhythm) or my best friend (singer). So, yeah, tell me what you think. Oh, and if you have any ideas for a name, by all means, go ahead.

Intro

verse 1~
Mindless, we're all controlled
our story, will never be told
So take my hand and come with me,
we're gonna break these chains and try to be free

Chorus~
I fight on against society
I'm struggeling to try to be free
My only heart's desire
Is for you to see the real me

verse 2~
Authority has it's grasp
laying out, our only path
But there's a light at the end of this road
Let's head to it, no matter what we're told

Chorus~
I fight on against society
I'm struggeling to try to be free
My only heart's desire
Is for you to see the real me
I fight on against society
I'm struggeling to try to be free
My only heart's desire
Is for you to see the real me

Bridge~
A new day, I wake again
I've accepted this could be the end result
I know, it's true...

Chorus~
I fight on against society
I'm struggeling to try to be free
My only heart's desire
Is for you to see the real me

Outro
Last edited by Codydude815 at Sep 3, 2008,