#1
False signals

Thoughts flooding my mind
Destroying files like fire
The things once stable
Now are irrational
You start to feel threatened
From absurd ideas
One day you realize
It was only a false signal

Believe something not true
One day you will think it is
Your mind starts to form a habit
Until what’s normal isn’t… for you
Obsessing beyond limits
To create something far worse
Then false signals

You realize your mind is burnt
Nothing to guide your morale senses
Try to start from scratch
Like a newborn baby
But somehow you lost vital files
Deep inside your mind
Something so simple snowballed
All from a false signal
#2
Thoughts flooding my mind
Destroying files like fire

-We've got two natural disasters right off the bat. This is dangerous and awesome.
The things once stable
Now are irrational
You start to feel threatened
From absurd ideas
One day you realize
It was only a false signal

-This is really the only thing in this song that I don't quite get, surprisingly, the title...

Believe something not true
One day you will think it is
Your mind starts to form a habit
Until what’s normal isn’t… for you

-I really liked the way these two lines worked. And the rhyme with the previous two lines is kickass, killer use of the ellipsis.
Obsessing beyond limits
-Really good way of putting that.
To create something far worse
Then false signals


You realize your mind is burnt
Nothing to guide your morale senses

-Ehh, these two aren't quite doing it for me. Theyre kind of "dry" sounding or something. I don't really know how to put it.
Try to start from scratch
Like a newborn baby
-Interesting way of putting it, I like it.
But somehow you lost vital files
Deep inside your mind
Something so simple snowballed
-Good imagery.
All from a false signal

This is really well written except in a few places. Is this a poem, or is it a specific genre of song, or what?


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#3
Im not sure what style you what consider it but its kinda like telling a story from a peotry side explaining something.

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