#1
Hey UGers.

This is the first song I have ever written, using the first riffs I have ever invented, the first I have used GP5. What is your opinion on it? It is only short and plan on working on it more. But I would like some feedback.

http://www.uploading.com/files/YUAEE5JS/Revenge.gp5.html
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I've never been caught (beating off), but my dad was picking up my gf once and "accidentaly" grabbed her boobs.
#2
i think its kinda cool, no idea what genre your headin towards but the guts is good :-)
#3
Yeah I draw a inspiration from a lot of genres. It starts off as a D G G# progression, then I started thinking about the Megadeth's Bad Omen, and used a similar barre chord progression, which was really cool when I first thought of it.

It's meant to be epic thrash, think ...And Justice for All.
Quote by IROBOTInferno
I've never been caught (beating off), but my dad was picking up my gf once and "accidentaly" grabbed her boobs.