ok, firstly. I like it. Its really a cool riff you have there and the guitar work is sublime. As far as production goes its lacking a bit. Bass drum is too loud and theres alot of compression on something, i cant quite figure out what it is yet. You need to adjust the levels too theyre a bit all over the place.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=16131536#post16131536

peace, good job i cant wait to hear the finished product

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this is a great mix of styles...do you know jason becker from cacophony? the tone sounds like his. your guitaring is very top notch...didn't notice any mishaps as far as playing

i agree with with tobythechimp, there seems to be lots of compression but it works with your song/tone - and the bass drum is very loud...my speakers vibrate everytime it hits

i'm not a huge fan of this type of music but if you finished and refined it, i'd give it another listen

3/5 =)

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Last edited by savestheday0288 at Sep 4, 2008,
Thanks for the crit. Firs of this is a good piece. You got some chops. I liked a lot of the licks and it had a great feel to the song. As already mentioned the production wasn't the greatest but overall good work.
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Besides the production, this is a seriously shredding song. I'm actually listening to the rest of the songs you have up now =)

Check it out if you get a chance
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