#1
Staring Into The Fire

Destiny, everything before me
The blaze of my dreams, burning within my mind
This fire inside me
Sparks a passion I've tried to hide

Can I touch this flame
Can I hold all that I desire?
Can I grasp this power
Or will I burn myself with my own fire?

Within reach, yet still distant
It can all end if I try to reach in an instant
Passing by trials and tribulations
Ignoring everything, anticipating world wide speculation

Can I touch this flame
Can I hold all that I desire?
Can I grasp this power
Or will I burn myself with my own fire?

One day soon
I hope to see it all in the palm of my hands
Some time soon
It'll all go as planned
And for now I'll just keep trying
To get ahold of that flame
Even if it takes an eternity
You'll all remember my name

Can I touch this flame
Can I hold all that I desire?
Can I grasp this power
Or will I burn myself with my own fire?
My gear
Ibanez RG7321
Jackson Warrior WRXT *FS/FT*
Jasmine J35
Squier Fender P-Bass
Ibanez TBX150H
Crate 4x12
Fender Rumble 60


Part of UG's 7 STRING LEGION
#2
I thought it was pretty cool, but it didn't come off to me as a thrash song. It seems like it would be more of a softer song, but have some good chorus riffs. But I like it.
#3
It's more power metal than anything, actually. I'm trying to come up with guitar for it but I've never tried this before, it's quite...frustrating.
My gear
Ibanez RG7321
Jackson Warrior WRXT *FS/FT*
Jasmine J35
Squier Fender P-Bass
Ibanez TBX150H
Crate 4x12
Fender Rumble 60


Part of UG's 7 STRING LEGION
#4
I know exactly how you feal at this point. I have some killer ass lyrics stocked up, but I can't think of a guitar line to throw with it.
My gear.
ESP-LTD EC-400 (EMG 85/81)
B.C. Rich Virgin N.J Series (Seymour Duncan Blackouts)
Ibanez SM-7 Smash Box Distortion
Dunlop Original Crybaby
Marshall MG100HDFX/MG412 Slant Cab Half Stack
#5
the lyrics are actually pretty good, nice flow. sounds like it would be a soft thrash song lol if thats possible

and don't worry about the guitar. just mess around then you'll find a riff you like. then you'll be like," oh shittttt" then you'll be a little creative roll. it all works out.

and if you don't mind, please read my lyrics and tell me what you think
#7
I like it, though I don't feel any lines really stand out
(reminds me of Thrice's Alchemy Index)

For music, I can't really imagine typical power metal
perhaps something slower (yet retaining that epic feel?)
(something large sounding)
Lord Gold feeds from your orifices and he wants to see you sweat.
Lord Gold probes you publicly and makes your pussy wet.
Now say his name.....
#8
dude, too much like Inside The Fire to me, but that's just me. It has the same basis kinda
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#9
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I know exactly how you feal at this point. I have some killer ass lyrics stocked up, but I can't think of a guitar line to throw with it.

Well I have written many guitar parts but i have never come up with decent lyrics to complete a song..
#10
Seems pretty good. I just can't stand it when people rhyme fire with desire. I know that seems a bit strange but EVERYONE does it and it's totally lame. Hell, pyre is so much more metal and actually has SOMETHING to do with fire. Wire? Liar? Higher? Inspire? Squier?!