#1
crit4crit guys. and thanks for reading


Red mist

It comes and goes,
those steady, steady flows
As red as blood,
An overwhelming flood

Common sense dissapears,
Along with all my fears
My fists clench up,
The mist starts up

The fault, mine or yours?
The anger starts with spores
It builds up so fast,
Even though it wont last

Common sense dissapears,
Along with all my fears
My fists clench up,
The mist starts up

As i watch the mist fade,
I look all around me
At everything I've done,
And I realize the Red Mist has won
#3
i liked it man, like really, especially the whole idea that when the blood starts flowing and you get angry you just dont realize what your doing and then when you calm down you like shit what happend. not really any crit man, good job
#4
Quote by sublime4evr
i liked it man, like really, especially the whole idea that when the blood starts flowing and you get angry you just dont realize what your doing and then when you calm down you like shit what happend. not really any crit man, good job


once again thanks for you thoughts man. and ill crit yours anytime