#1
Verse

Remember
When time seemed like one of life’s many infinite resources?
When days could just float on by without anyone of you noticing?
The moment you realized that so many moments have come and gone?
You’re left with no choice but to move along

Chorus

The days here are numbered
So hold onto your memories
Resisting will do nothing
Because you can not stop time
‘Cause it will keep on fading
Taking the moments with it
And in a matter of time
All things fade, even our minds

Verse

You regret
Multitudes of events that have happened that just fade away?
Like grains of sand that slip through your hands and disappear into the dark?
Bit by bit they fall away, helplessly you watch them fade with each new day
You can’t stop it; you will die if you try

Chorus

The days here are numbered
So hold onto your memories
Resisting will do nothing
Because you can not stop time
‘Cause it will keep on fading
Taking the moments with it
And in a matter of time
All things fade, even our minds

Chorus

This could be the last time
That you will sleep through the night
And still awake the next day
You can’t live just to fight
‘Cause life will keep on fading
Taking the moments with it
And in a matter of time
All things fade, even your mind


Chorus II

I’m in this losing fight with you, trying to stop something that I can’t
I can’t stop us from dying
If I told you we could do this, I’d be lying. But I’ll continue
To fight time, and die trying.

Bridge

We were both in this fight
Now I’m the only one
I’ve lost the gift of life
Because of what I’ve done
I tried to fight
To stop what can’t be stopped
I’ve lost my life

Chorus II

I’m in this losing fight alone, trying to stop something that I can’t
I can’t win the fight this time
I’ve accepted defeat, death is waiting, it’s time for me to die
I’ve made peace, I couldn’t stop time.

c4c if you'd like.
#3
I'm only gonna crit the chorus cause i'm limited on time right now. Sorry man.

Quote by Gordita Supreme
Verse

The days here are numbered
So hold onto your memories
Resisting will do nothing
Because you can not stop time
In the next line, there is a 'Cause. So basically, two lines, and two "becauses". Maybe change the first one to something like "You know you can not stop time." or something.
‘Cause it will keep on fading
Taking the moments with it
And in a matter of time
All things fade, even our minds
I think I would put "everything" instead of "all things" here.

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It is a pretty good chorus dude. I like how it's written. Good subject too. ;-)
Keep it up. I also have a chorus I would like to bit crittededed haha. The title of the thread is Lovish Chorus. Just posted.