hey man that was pretty cool, it sounds cool with some distortion as well. My only suggestion is doing something a bit more with the chic strums, maybe just accentuating certain strums even.
The sound was really niice.
But when im open the tab i see : !-------_--8@-----!c?
Really rare???
well that was nice and groovy. I had my hips shakin

I really think this would sound a lot better with some leads over that guitar part though. some kind of melodic hook would do so much for this song.
bassline is cool when it comes in although the Ab sounds pretty awkward.
the count out at the beginning seems really weird since it goes from pretty loud with the drums to just the guitar. I think you could probably just cut that.
but the little rhythm part is pretty sweet.
looks like the start of quite a catchy song.

could you crit mine? it's in my sig.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...