#2
not a bad song, but the vocals dont sound very good sometimes, for example at the start of the last paragraph (what we can be is a diligent nation)

3/5

btw is that your girlfriend at 1:40?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=949971
#3
yeah everything was kinda rushed which led to mediocre quality but hey 3/5 aint bad thanks. and yeah thats my gf i had to put her in the video somehow since she helped me out so much on it.
thanks and ill check your song out right now