not a bad song, but the vocals dont sound very good sometimes, for example at the start of the last paragraph (what we can be is a diligent nation)


btw is that your girlfriend at 1:40?

yeah everything was kinda rushed which led to mediocre quality but hey 3/5 aint bad thanks. and yeah thats my gf i had to put her in the video somehow since she helped me out so much on it.
thanks and ill check your song out right now