fill
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2007
538 IQ
#1
So, My New Hardcore'ish song Plz C4C!!!

I want to steal bank)))

Ps By The way What you think about drumline? (because i am like play drum)
Attachments:
bank.zip
War Is Over
(If You Want It)

SorryForMyEnglish=)))

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bakshandloomis
Ug's Metalcore fanboy
Join date: Sep 2006
519 IQ
#2
Thanks for the crit!
What is up with the first bar? . I liked verse 1 a lot. I wasn't too fond of the chorus until the tremolo picking came in. The part at 63 would sound a lot better if you kept it all as quarter notes, IMO, instead have the two 8th notes in front of the 4-5-7. The rest of the breakdown/bridge was cool. The clean part was frekin sweet, I think you should expand on that, make it a lot longer. You had a nice transition coming back into the distortion. I loved the last riff of the song.
Overall, I'd give it a 7.5/10, nice job.
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killswitch engage has some dissonant riffs, they're kind grindcore tho