OK, you're probably sick of seeing metal songs in this forum. But, I started writing this and am completely at a loss about where to go with this, so any contribution would be appreciated, and of course a C4C.
k koo.zip
Quote by duncang
maybe it's because i secrely agree that tracedin inymballsackistheb best album ever

he's got the fire and the fury,
at his command
well you don't have to worry,
if you hold onto jesus' hand
i listened to it, and so far it sounds pretty good.
not really sure what to suggest, but if i were you i would probly put in something slow, like some power chords and pinch harmonics. then repeat it all a few times and perhaps a solo?