#1
this is a first draft for a new song i am working on its metal like megadeth style. like i said this is only the first draft so it just kind of a idea right now.


They send our men away
While they stay fighting at home
They send more and more men
To continue the bloodshed all this for some oil?
They swear to tell us the truth
Without even a second guess
But they never tell the truth
Even you can’t lie forever


7 years of war with nothing to show
7 years of lies
Your rain can’t last forever

Your time is up
Theirs nothing left for you to prove
You use the war to get your revenge
Your rain has come to A end
Your time is up
Theirs nothing left for you to show
Your rain is done


You can try to cover it up
With oil and war
But we see right through your lies
And cause of that your despised
You say the war is done when no one has won
We are in a impossible war
Its not even with it win
Theirs nothing to win anymore



7 years of war with nothing to show
7 years of lies
Your rain can’t last forever

Your time is up
Theirs nothing left for you to prove
You use the war to get your revenge
Your rain has come to A end
Your time is up
Theirs nothing left for you to show
Your rain is done


7 years of war with nothing to show
7 years of lies
Your rain can’t last forever

Your time is up
Theirs nothing left for you to prove
You use the war to get your revenge
Your rain has come to A end
Your time is up
Theirs nothing left for you to show
Your rain is done
#2
Is it supposed to be "reign" instead of "rain"?

Anyways, this sounds like a typical anti-Bush song (or something)
Lord Gold feeds from your orifices and he wants to see you sweat.
Lord Gold probes you publicly and makes your pussy wet.
Now say his name.....
#3
haha yes thank you i didnt rememeber how to spell that one so i used rain like rainning
#4
haha yeah i thought reign, but i liked it man, megadeatth really aint my style so im not to sure how that usually sounds, but my only suggestion would be to get some rhyming in, which you will probably do considering its only the first draft, but man i liked it, probably helps that i dont like bush or the war btu i guess thats your target market haha, c4c?

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