#1
Let me know what you think. Thanks everyone.

The first time I saw you, I just lost my breath
I turned around and walked the other way
Did not notice anything around me, the only
Thing on my mind was you

You were everywhere but I could not get to you
There was a door but it was locked
One day I walked in, there were people there
I gazed at you from across the room

You are the girl who I can tell anything
You are the one that picks me up when I am down
You are the girl who, I want to be with
I like to call you my everything

Later on that year, you were just steps away
I should have walked them but I was scared
I finally met you then you let me in
We stayed up all night just to talk

Just laying there, you and me
You talk about these things, but I’m lost in your eyes
The suns about to come up, you’re right by my side
I tuck you in and then I say goodnight

You are the girl who I can tell anything
You are the one that picks me up when I am down
You are the girl who, I want to be with
I like to call you my everything

When we’re together all I do is smile
I wish this moment would last all my life
Everytime our lips touch, it gives me such a rush
These butterflies that will not leave

What’s in the future, no one ever knows
I know you’re scared but I’ll be right there by your side
You don’t need no worries, all you need is hope
This love will last until the end of time.
Fender Fat Strat (Arctic White w/ maple neck)
Alvarez AD62SC
Vox AD30VT
#3
thanks, i got you
Fender Fat Strat (Arctic White w/ maple neck)
Alvarez AD62SC
Vox AD30VT
#4
haha yeah, by the way man, im abut to get the same guitar as you, same color and neck too haha, just thought id throw that out there
#5
that's cool. it's a fun one to play...not to mention it looks great! you'll enjoy it
Fender Fat Strat (Arctic White w/ maple neck)
Alvarez AD62SC
Vox AD30VT
#6
c4c...anyone?
Fender Fat Strat (Arctic White w/ maple neck)
Alvarez AD62SC
Vox AD30VT
#7
anymore help?
Fender Fat Strat (Arctic White w/ maple neck)
Alvarez AD62SC
Vox AD30VT
#8
The only thing I can say is that the flow and imagrey could use a little more work, but other than that it great! Its not that the imagrey is bad, its just very cliche and kind of bland, I think that thesauruses work great for that! Agian, everything else is very good, keep it up!
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