Jake the Peg
With an extra leg
Join date: May 2008
1,177 IQ
#1
This is something we wrote yesterday at a 2 hour rehersal. tabbed it out this morning and added some solo.
tell me what ya think, c4c.

thanks
Attachments:
riff_54.zip
'If I were not a physicist, I would probably be a musician. I often think in music. I live my daydreams in music. I see my life in terms of music.' Albert Einstein
Lumberjackted11
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2008
439 IQ
#2
way to slow until the tempo change, the whole song sounded much better at 200 bpm.
HeavyMetaldude
Banned
Join date: Apr 2006
728 IQ
#3
-Defenitly too slow, but i like the tempo change, so i made it 160 and i kept the change at 200. It was much better.
-Your solo's need bends. It's just too bland without any bends, it needs a bit of character. (that sounded dumb didnt it?)

+Awesome Riffs.
+Good Drums.
+Great song altogether.

Just needs some feeeeeel man. Put in some epic bendz.

Crit Mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=951539
Jake the Peg
With an extra leg
Join date: May 2008
1,177 IQ
#5
hello shredders

good day to thee, earthling
'If I were not a physicist, I would probably be a musician. I often think in music. I live my daydreams in music. I see my life in terms of music.' Albert Einstein