#1
Very simple riff in this song im worken on a new style of singing for myself. Please crit! thanks guys.

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Crashton

Lyrics:

Hellbound
"Fallen over walking
shoelaces, tied together
pick myself up off the floor
im bleeding now away the pain
of heartaches and tears
standing in the shadows of fear and hope

while love strands me

hellbound and hopeless

my thoughts awake are dreams of you,
simple things, spark a moment of peace
a smile for you,
hidden away behind one way glass
trip myself to forget,
but I end up falling for you"
#4
I love it
Your vocals are great, the guitar is perfect for this song, and I love the song itself.
Its nice, simple and feels really deep.
Keep it up!

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