This song is my first song, and I have only been playing for ten months. I am cool for criticism. Also the lyrics suck, and hopefully, if you like it I could use some lyrical help. Anyways, please comment, I would like to know whether or not this song is ACTUALLY decent whatsoever.

Here is the link: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/otacon17/music/all/play402721
Last edited by otacon17 at Sep 6, 2008,