#3
Awesome man
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#5
Well, first, NEVER save as a jpeg, always png.

Second, the overlapping font is a bit hard to read.

Lastly, what the hell do it say along the black line and under the "eyeball"?

Now, art wise, it's pretty sick. I love it.
#7
My complaint is the circle looks out of place and artificial, whereas the other stuff looks more hand drawn.
#10
it looks good but put the last line somewhere else
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#13
some is kinda hard to read but the art is sick!
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#15
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My complaint is the circle looks out of place and artificial, whereas the other stuff looks more hand drawn.

This. They clash.
And most of the text is bloody impossible to read. Other than that, awesome.
#17
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Well, first, NEVER save as a jpeg, always png.


He probably saved it as a jpeg so it didn't have a massive file-size. Png are huge.
#18
The text placement is on purpose
They all say the same thing.
BURN THE DUSK in 4 colors and layers
With Defining what never existed under it

The Conceiled black text is another of the title, It might be edited out.
The "eyeball" Is a lightpane which i am going to change due to its ease of being taken as an eyeball.

I NEED HELP THINKING OF WHAT TO PUT THERE INSTEAD HELP ME UG.
#19
ill be straight, its cool but the text work is fuggen ugly
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#20
[quote="'[BurnTheDusk"]']The text placement is on purpose
They all say the same thing.
BURN THE DUSK in 4 colors and layers
With Defining what never existed under it

The Conceiled black text is another of the title, It might be edited out.
The "eyeball" Is a lightpane which i am going to change due to its ease of being taken as an eyeball.

I NEED HELP THINKING OF WHAT TO PUT THERE INSTEAD HELP ME UG.
Well I'm telling you that if you want to be a graphic designer you should move the text so that it is easier to read.

If you want something like that to sell you must do it right. You have to be clear with your message.
#21
the text is a eye sore the way it is now...i think the way the "burn the dusk" part is fine, all like 5 layers...i think it would help a ton if you just move the "defining what never existed" down would help a ton, it would make everything easier to read
#22
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Well I'm telling you that if you want to be a graphic designer you should move the text so that it is easier to read.

If you want something like that to sell you must do it right. You have to be clear with your message.

Its not really a career, just making an ep cover fo my band mayne.
#23
[quote="'[BurnTheDusk"]']Its not really a career, just making an ep cover fo my band mayne.

Well you should know that promoting an album by album art is part of promoting the band. If you wanted someone to buy it at a record store you have to know how art affects a person.
#24
I would buy it if I saw it in an album store.
It looks sick dude. The way the words overlap is awesome!

The album title is a little weird though :/
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#27
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I would buy it if I saw it in an album store.
It looks sick dude. The way the words overlap is awesome!

The album title is a little weird though :/

Defining What Never Existed?
I like it personaly.
#28
I dont think that picture is C.D. size. So i can't like it. Sorry brah

/kidding.
#29
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I dont think that picture is C.D. size. So i can't like it. Sorry brah

/kidding.

The funniest part is its perfect for album size BRAH.
#31
[quote="'[BurnTheDusk"]']Defining What Never Existed?
I like it personaly.

Okay, I misread it. ...

I think you shouldn't overlap them.

I read it as "Burning what never existed"
..
Sorry.
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#32
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Okay, I misread it. ...

I think you shouldn't overlap them.

I read it as "Burning what never existed"
..
Sorry.


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#33
It looks awesome!
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#34
cant read it
Soon you will sit on the bench
of those who deny I have my soul
You sell a dream you create
Condemned by what you condemned before
Smooth are the words you sing down and high
Underground is your joy your laws
#36
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Well, first, NEVER save as a jpeg, always png.

Second, the overlapping font is a bit hard to read.

Lastly, what the hell do it say along the black line and under the "eyeball"?

Now, art wise, it's pretty sick. I love it.

jpegs are ok, you just have to have the quality settings up so you dont get the artifacting this guy has
#37
hard to read... VERY!

the first one is better
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