#1
hi all

been playing for about a year and seven months, and recently to help with my improvising i've been recording stuff on my phone in one take and putting it on my myspace. I'm going to keep doing this on a regular basis, just keeping the best stuff as i accumulate tracks.

you can hear my first 4 here:

www.myspace.com/stiletostabwound


it would really help if i could get some constructive feedback, about the playing rather than the recording quality.

lemme know what you all think
#2
Well I listened to team spirit and I would work on the timing of the two notes played after the intro the ones that go "da-dah" and after that there is the same two notes being played over and over and over so you catch my drift. spice it up a little