PinkIsCool
UG's Pink Pirate!
Join date: Mar 2006
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#2
That was actually pretty sweet, imo.

The drums were very good throughout, except I think you should utilize the double bass a bit more. I also think the song kind of lacked structure in the section after the first chorus. And at the beggining, I think you should get rid of that first drum build-up and go directly into the part with the bass drum and hi hats at bar 9. But other than that, great work. I really liked the chorus, and the part after the second chorus which I assumed was the bridge. The guitar riffs weren't anything great, but they got the job done and sounded good. Really god job dude 9/10.

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