#1
On my profile, I wrote all the instruments, it needs a lot of editing and mixing, and I know the volume is low, this is just a draft, so I would like some comments.

c4c.

Edit: I also know the drums are really, really shit, I'm working on them.
Double edit: The solo starts at 1:04 if you want to skip to it.
Last edited by Portuguese_boy at Sep 7, 2008,
#2
Love it man. Definally gonna be a great song when you have the proper version going. Now get going and finish the song
#4
well dude, the drums really dont fit with the song many times, and the solo starts violently, I mean, all the sound you are listening suddenly dissapears and then the solo jumps in, that caught my attention :p (in a bad way)

I also found the guitar playing a bit sloppy at some points :S

anyway the ideas are good and it can be a great intro with a bit more of work

3/5

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=949971
#5
This is actually really good. The only thing that's bad is the recording, try practicing more with a tempo to be able to play in time. The harmony sounds almost out of tone. With proper recording it'd be awesome. But don't worry the areas in where you need to work aren't that hard. Just keep practicing and recording yourself until you see you recorded yourself playing smoothly.

Good work.
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#6
Thanks guys, so I'm going to work on the drums (change them completely), and about the violent sound, I did that on purpose but the drums ruined it.
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