It's pretty good- the vocals could use more aggression, or you could make the guitar a little softer than the original. I just feel like the vocals and music don't fit together at the mo- you could go either way on this one though.

Sweet song choice, btw.
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I'd rather post a chat up line with an escape route in case it starts going wrong.

"Did it hurt when you fell from heaven?"

*girl looks unimpressed*

"Because it looks like you landed on your face."