#3
I think you're retarded cause it works just fine this way.
"This shit here's called Death"
"What the fuck? You mean I'm gonna hit this shit and die?"
"No Nigga! I said Deaf. You hit this and you aint gonna hear shit!"
#4
yes but i will guarantee you get a serious fewer number of replies.

anyhoo it was pretty good at the more tech parts, although its more metalcore than punk tbh.
#5
yeah this isn't my genre really. check this out if you like btbam
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"This shit here's called Death"
"What the fuck? You mean I'm gonna hit this shit and die?"
"No Nigga! I said Deaf. You hit this and you aint gonna hear shit!"
#6
bars 20 - 56 were fantastic the rest was a bit meh tbh, sure its technical and yeah i like that but it was nearly to eratic to be catchy. maybe as transitions but as standalone riffs, not my cup of tea. but as i say, 20-56 were awesome.
#7
Can you put in GP4 form? If it's anything like BTBAM I want to check it out.
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killswitch engage has some dissonant riffs, they're kind grindcore tho

#9
it seemed way too all over the place for the style you seem to be leaning toward.
you've got some cool riffs in there (opener was very well done IMO) but they just don't flow that well. Time Sigs just seem really gimmicky in this song. most of it sounded like it would feel 10 times better just in normal 4/4. but that might just be me.
keep working this though, it could be cool.

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