#2
that was pretty awesome.
that's really all I have to say.
you need to get that singer soon though!

and you're automatically extremely cool for having anthony green and circa survive on your top friends.
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#3
Quote by Its_Rock77
that was pretty awesome.
that's really all I have to say.
you need to get that singer soon though!

and you're automatically extremely cool for having anthony green and circa survive on your top friends.



haha I'm a green fanboy too I'm learning how to sing, and auditioning a singer soon, and jamming with a drummer wednesday

feel free to check out the other songs thanks for the crit
#4
very nice. I'm also a HUGE circa survive/anthony green fan. I loved the tunes.
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#5
I did listen to all of them by the way. the are really fresh and cool. good luck with your singer search.
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#6
Hey say ocean,

i liked the feel of demo 5. im a fan of those chord changes - quite epic if i might say so...

some of the little guitar licks/fills near the begginning seemed to suffer slight timing issues. However as the song progressed i didnt notice it again.

I thought the lead guitar played some very appropriate and listen-2-able stuff as the song progressed too.

All in all - good stuff mate. (Hope you can get a full band together )

Crit mine?

"my new acoustic song"
#8
Quote by Slaveaway
Hey say ocean,

i liked the feel of demo 5. im a fan of those chord changes - quite epic if i might say so...

some of the little guitar licks/fills near the begginning seemed to suffer slight timing issues. However as the song progressed i didnt notice it again.

I thought the lead guitar played some very appropriate and listen-2-able stuff as the song progressed too.

All in all - good stuff mate. (Hope you can get a full band together )

Crit mine?

"my new acoustic song"



Haha thanks man. Yeah the timing is off, but I was too lazy to fix it. And there isn't really a lead guitar part, it's just the exact same guitar part on each side. And I'll crit everyone's tomorrow
#9
I like it riff after riff like this. Would sound even better with a real drummer and some vocals, so once you fill in those holes you'll have pretty damn good sound going.

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#11
Sounds good man, I dig it.
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